RE: Dubya style sentence formulation

Subject: RE: Dubya style sentence formulation
From: APEERY -at- FAMILYDOLLAR -dot- COM
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Wed, 1 Nov 2000 10:23:57 -0500

I like the second option - why does it stink?

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Matt Floyd [SMTP:Floyd -at- ORsoftware -dot- com]
> Sent: Tuesday, October 31, 2000 8:34 PM
> To: TECHWR-L
> Subject: Dubya style sentence formulation
>
> "Select the Group Name that you want to change the item order for."
>
> "Select the Group Name for which you want to change the item order."
>
> They both stink.
>
> Anyone?
>
> An answer I wait with anticipation for... wait, lemme rephrase that...
>
> Matt Floyd

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