RE: can anyone suggest a synonym or a better way of saying broken down

Subject: RE: can anyone suggest a synonym or a better way of saying broken down
From: "Smith, Allyson" <as210028 -at- exchange -dot- SanDiegoCA -dot- NCR -dot- COM>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 14 Dec 2000 16:19:34 -0500

Or, "categorized."

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From: Walter Bross [mailto:Indulis -at- msn -dot- com]
Sent: Thursday, December 14, 2000 11:47 AM
To: TECHWR-L
Subject: Re: can anyone suggest a synonym or a better way of saying
broken dow n


> In a lot of the documentation that was written previously, and which I'm
now
> editing, is the phrase "broken down" used a lot. For example,
>
> "This file contains all holdings at that trust broken down by fund and
> account."


try: identified; distinguished; separated; detailed; specified; arranged;
grouped; organized; and even, broken "out"

or, rewrite the sentence to say "in these categories:..."


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