RE: About/ of

Subject: RE: About/ of
From: "Swallow, William" <WSwallow -at- courion -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 19 Jul 2001 08:01:25 -0400

That's a very awkward sentence... my stab:

"Personal Details allow[s?] [you?] to store and maintain a complete record
of employee information." [is 'personal' accurate? Does it really store
height, weight, marital status, number of kids, medical history, favorite
color...?]

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BILL SWALLOW
Technical Writer
C O U R I O N C O R P O R A T I O N
1881 Worcester Road
Framingham, Mass. 01701
T E L * 508-879-8400 x316
F A X * 508-879-8500
www.courion.com
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