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Re: Commas or no commas?

Subject: Re: Commas or no commas?
From: "Diane Evans" <diane_evans -at- hotmail -dot- com>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Tue, 01 Oct 2002 20:29:17 +0000



Does anyone know which is correct? I haven't been able to find this in my style guides...

* Our team's expertise ranges from production and assembly to food processing to distribution and transportation.
* Our team's expertise ranges from production and assembly, to food processing, to distribution and transportation.

Both of these make me cringe. Maybe a bulleted list?

Our team's expertise includes:

*production
*assembly
*food processing
*distribution
*transportation

Diane Evans
Technical Writer

Washington State Coordinator, Tombstone Project
http://www.rootsweb.com/~cemetery/washing.html
Oregon State Coordinator, Tombstone Project
http://www.rootsweb.com/~cemetery/oregon.html


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