Punctuation (was: I got thrown for a loop.)
... the greeting is us[u]ally mispunctuated (missing a comma after "Hello." ...
David Neeley commented,
As for the comma after "Hello"--I think that is optional in this use today.
I agree with David: it's a matter of style. _I_ certainly don't use a comma after "Hello", especially when "Hello" is followed by someone's name, but I don't think using the comma in that situation is incorrect punctuation. (Note use of UK punctuation above, with the comma after the closing quotation marks; that's a matter of style, too.)
I differentiate between punctuation that is essential or at least very important to convey the intended meaning and punctuation that is a stylistic preference that is not needed to convey the intended meaning. A comma after "Hello" definitely falls in the second category.
More about my views on punctuation and grammar are in my article "Escape from the grammar trap", http://www.raycomm.com/techwhirl/magazine/writing/grammartrap.html.
Regards, Jean
Jean Hollis Weber
The Technical Editors' Eyrie http://www.jeanweber.com/
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