RE: English 101

Subject: RE: English 101
From: "Kathleen" <keamac -at- cox -dot- net>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Wed, 18 May 2005 20:27:31 -0700


You might speak to the VP about using the indefinite term "It" in the
title--it's uninformative and the title would be better if a concrete
referent is used. You could frame it in terms of more catchy or
something like that.

Unless the "it" should be IT (in which case it should be Information
Technology (IT)).

Kathleen

-----Original Message-----
From: John Posada


With that said, I have a heading:

"How to Use It to Develop New ASPX Pages"

Aside from what you may think of the word selection, which I got from
someone else. They have a VP title after their name and since its only
for internal use, I'd rather not change it if I don't have to.





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