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> Below is an extract from some programmer-written documentation
> that I am assigned to clean up.
>
> [ The detail part of the choice type element contains a list
> of choices separated by the pipe ( | ) character. Each choice
> consists of a number, an equality operator (which may be '#'
> for equals and '<' for greater than), and a format string. ]
>
> Notice that at the end of the third line it says " and '<' for
> greater than". Yes, it uses the lessthan sign for greater than.
> In defense of my colleague this is from the Java message spec.
> He did not implement it this way.
>
> What I've done is insert a footnote saying "This is not a
> misprint. '<' really does mean 'greater than' here. See
> [URL to java documentation page]
>
> Is this the best way?
Jessica:
In every less-than or greater-than comparison, there's one number that's
being tested for "less than the other" and one being tested for "greater
than the other".
The excerpt you provided doesn't mention the two operands of the
comparison, but I presume that they're describes somewhere... Can you
rework the explanation so it describes the "<" symbol as meaning "A is
less than B" rather than the current "B is greater than A"?
-Andrew
=== Andrew Warren - awarren -at- synaptics -dot- com
=== Synaptics, Inc - Santa Clara, CA
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