RE: Why you shouldn't re-read already submitted stuff

["Lauren" <lt34 -at- csus -dot- edu>]

I didn't catch it on the first pass, "What's wrong?  There's subject and
verb agreement."  I didn't even see the numbering.  "And iii) we are great
proofreaders."

Lauren
 

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> Behalf Of Susan Hogarth
> Sent: Thursday, June 07, 2007 11:35 AM
> To: TECHWR-L
> Subject: Why you shouldn't re-read already submitted stuff
> 
> I was harvesting bits of our last-submitted proposal for the current
> one, and came across this howler:
> 
> "...the contracts that we have obtained in the past ... show clearly
> that we 1) have the experience ... and b) that we can handle ...."
> 
> Whoopsie.
> 
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