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No, it is not "bad" English - to the contrary it is "standard" English
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From: "Nancy Allison" <maker -at- verizon -dot- net>
To: <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Sent: Tuesday, April 22, 2008 8:12 AM
Subject: Repeat the verb?
>
> ---The bank should have clear standards for the collection and
modification of
> all elements, and should combine these elements in a manner that most
> effectively enables it to quantify its exposure to operational risk.
>
> ---The bank should have clear standards for the collection and
modification of
> all elements, and combine these elements in a manner that most
effectively
> enables it to quantify its exposure to operational risk.
>
> I always want to repeat the modal auxiliary; it seems too hard to wade
through
> the first long noun phrase and instantly remember that auxiliary when
you hit
> the second base verb form. However, I have been informed that this
type of
> repetition is "bad English."
>
> Whaddya say?
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