Re: Grammar (again!)

Subject: Re: Grammar (again!)
From: Chris Morton <salt -dot- morton -at- gmail -dot- com>
To: techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
Date: Wed, 20 May 2009 08:58:08 -0700

We have licensed six technologies, all in various stages of
development, to other entities.

> Chris


On Wed, May 20, 2009 at 8:55 AM, Chris Morton <salt -dot- morton -at- gmail -dot- com> wrote:

> We have licensed six technologies, all in various stages of
> development...
>
> > Chris
>
> On Wed, May 20, 2009 at 8:53 AM, Deborah Hemstreet <
> dvora -at- tech-challenged -dot- com> wrote:
>
>> Hi All,
>>
>> When writing text for a brochure, which do you believe reads more
>> smoothly:
>>
>> 1. We have licensed out six technologies that are in various stages of
>> development...
>>
>> 2. We have licensed out six technologies in various stages of
>> development...
>>
>> Could you explain WHY you believe 1 or 2 is better than the other? I
>> don't want to give my opnion, as I want as objective a response as
>> possible.
>>
>> Thanks!
>>
>> Deborah
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References:
GUI Elements defined: From: Bruce Megan (ST-CO/ENG2.2)
Re: GUI Elements defined: From: Gregory P Sweet
Re: GUI Elements defined: From: Chris Morton
Grammar (again!): From: Deborah Hemstreet
Re: Grammar (again!): From: Chris Morton

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