Re: Appropriate -- so inappropriate!

[Janice Gelb <Janice -dot- Gelb -at- Sun -dot- COM>]

Gene Kim-Eng wrote:
> "Color preferences" would be perfectly satisfactory for the usual readers of 
> documents I work on.  But I can see certain target audiences where the 
> superfluous "choose the one you want" (all single-syllable words) would be more 
> readily understood than "set your preference."
> 
> Yes, reading comprehension can really be that bad.
> 

I don't really think this is an issue of reading
comprehension. Perhaps my example wasn't entirely
clear. I think that "Choose the colors for your
screen" is perfectly clear and that including a
phrase about readers choosing something they like
is unnecessary (for example, "Choose the colors that
you want for your screen").

-- Janice

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> ----- Original Message ----- 
> From: "Janice Gelb" <Janice -dot- Gelb -at- Sun -dot- COM>
>> It's the "one you want" part that I don't think
>> is necessary. "In the Display window, set your
>> color preferences" seems fine to me. Saying
>> "In the Display window, choose the color settings
>> that you want to use" is the wording that I think
>> is superfluous.
> 
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