Re: Comma rules

Subject: Re: Comma rules
From: John Posada <jposada99 -at- gmail -dot- com>
To: Rob Hudson <caveatrob -at- gmail -dot- com>
Date: Fri, 9 Oct 2009 13:55:59 -0400

I'd go with:


Throughout 2009, EA Entertainment should start to see lower operating
costs and increased productivity.

or

EA Entertainment should start to see lower operating costs and
increased productivity throughout 2009.



On September 4, 2008, the shares of EA Entertainment were valued at
$46.00 per share. This is a 16% increase from the recorded value of 6
months ago when shares closed at $15.93 per share (March 4, 2008.)

or

On September 4, 2008, the shares of EA Entertainment were valued at
$46.00 per share; a 16% increase from the value recorded 6 months ago
when shares closed at $15.93 per share (March 4, 2008.)

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