TechWhirl (TECHWR-L) is a resource for technical writing and technical communications professionals of all experience levels and in all industries to share their experiences and acquire information.
For two decades, technical communicators have turned to TechWhirl to ask and answer questions about the always-changing world of technical communications, such as tools, skills, career paths, methodologies, and emerging industries. The TechWhirl Archives and magazine, created for, by and about technical writers, offer a wealth of knowledge to everyone with an interest in any aspect of technical communications.
Subject:RE: suggestions for naming a UI element From:"Combs, Richard" <richard -dot- combs -at- Polycom -dot- com> To:"Leisa Ashbaugh" <leisa -dot- ashbaugh -at- aisystems -dot- org>, <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com> Date:Tue, 27 Oct 2009 14:50:32 -0600
Leisa Ashbaugh wrote:
> I am working with a new UI that has a 'scoreboard' overview for a set
of
> data. There are a number of constraints, and each constraint
receives
> a score. Each score has a corresponding "traffic light" (little
colored
> circle, ala red, green, yellow) that indicate the 'fitness' of the
> score.
<snip>
>
> "The Scoreboard shows the schedule's constraint violations and
> penalties. 'Traffic
>
> light' indicators help you quickly determine which violations and
> penalties fall
>
> outside acceptable boundaries."
I like Robert's suggestion of "status indicators." But I have problems
with your sample sentences that changing "traffic light" to "status"
won't fix.
The scoreboard doesn't just show constraint "violations and penalties,"
does it? I presume a green light is neither a violation nor a penalty.
And wouldn't _all_ violations and penalties "fall outside acceptable
boundaries"?
For that matter, the entire phrase seems inappropriate. A "penalty" is a
punishment. I doubt the "scoreboard" has anything to do with penalties
as most of us understand the term. I wouldn't characterize a schedule
exceeding some constraint level as being in "violation," either.
I suggest using more neutral, less "crime drama" terminology to refer to
the three statuses, like safe, marginal, and high or excessive
IMHO, of course. :-)
Richard G. Combs
Senior Technical Writer
Polycom, Inc.
richardDOTcombs AT polycomDOTcom
303-223-5111
------
rgcombs AT gmailDOTcom
303-777-0436
------
Free Software Documentation Project Web Cast: Covers developing Table of
Contents, Context IDs, and Index, as well as Doc-To-Help
2009 tips, tricks, and best practices. http://www.doctohelp.com/SuperPages/Webcasts/
Help & Manual 5: The complete help authoring tool for individual
authors and teams. Professional power, intuitive interface. Write
once, publish to 8 formats. Multi-user authoring and version control! http://www.helpandmanual.com/
---
You are currently subscribed to TECHWR-L as archive -at- web -dot- techwr-l -dot- com -dot-