Re: Help file TOC Sentence VS Question

Subject: Re: Help file TOC Sentence VS Question
From: Robert Lauriston <robert -at- lauriston -dot- com>
To: TECHWR-L -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
Date: Tue, 27 Oct 2009 14:15:52 -0700

I'm not sure what you're talking about. Topic headings go in the TOC.
They don't directly affect the index, the author can add them or not
as appropriate.

If I didn't think it would help the reader, then I wouldn't define a
"Create" section for the index.

I don't believe that the delivery format has any effect on what
belongs in an index--except that when distribution is print only, it's
important to have a really good index, and if possible I hire a
professional indexer.


On Tue, Oct 27, 2009 at 2:06 PM, <kathleen -at- writefortheuser -dot- com> wrote:
> So long as it says what is being created, grouped, etc. It also depends
> on whether you're talking about help or print/pdf output. I don't think
> it helps a reader to look in the index and see Create by itself,
> presuming that there are a number of things that could be created. Then
> you have a list of pages (or links) that relate to completely different
> topics. That type of organization would make it just as easy to thumb
> through the material looking for items, or do a search.
>
> Kathleen
>
>> -------- Original Message --------
>> Subject: Re: Help file TOC Sentence VS Question
>> From: Robert Lauriston <robert -at- lauriston -dot- com>
>> Date: Tue, October 27, 2009 3:41 pm
>> To: TECHWR-L -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
>>
>>
>> I don't see any problem with an index section such as:
>>
>> Create
>>   group
>>   project
>>   schedule
>>   time cards
>>   user
>>
>> On Tue, Oct 27, 2009 at 1:15 PM,  <kathleen -at- writefortheuser -dot- com> wrote:
>> >
>> > I think it's a fine idea to list the thing that is being created,
>> > viewed, etc. for each heading. I've seen indexes with 6 or more
>> > instances of "create," etc. I suppose if you're certain your index will
>> > never do that, it would be ok to leave the topic off, but ...
>> >
>> > Kathleen
>> >
>> >> -------- Original Message --------
>> >> Subject: RE: Help file TOC Sentence VS Question
>> >> From: "Leonard C. Porrello" <Leonard -dot- Porrello -at- SoleraTec -dot- com>
>> >> Date: Tue, October 27, 2009 3:03 pm
>> >> To: "Robert Lauriston" <robert -at- lauriston -dot- com>,
>> >> <TECHWR-L -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>, "Robert Courtney" <bobsc1 -at- earthlink -dot- net>
>> >>
>> >>
>> >> What Lauriston says. Otherwise, the reader has to scan a gazillion instances of "How do I." AND, be careful not to mix verbs and nouns. Some people would say you should use either ...
>> >>
>> >>   Understanding Time Cards
>> >>   Creating a Time Card
>> >>   Viewing a Time Card
>> >>   Finding a Time Card
>> >>
>> >> or ...
>> >>
>> >>   Understand Time Cards
>> >>   Create a Time Card
>> >>   View a Time Card
>> >>   Find a Time Card
>> >>
>> >> You might also consider the following:
>> >>
>> >> Time Cards
>> >>       Understanding
>> >>       Creating
>> >>       Viewing
>> >>       Finding
>> >>
>> >>
>> >> Leonard
>> >>
>> >>
>> >> -----Original Message-----
>> >> From: techwr-l-bounces+leonard -dot- porrello=soleratec -dot- com -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com [mailto:techwr-l-bounces+leonard -dot- porrello=soleratec -dot- com -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com] On Behalf Of Robert Lauriston
>> >> Sent: Tuesday, October 27, 2009 12:12 PM
>> >> To: TECHWR-L -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com
>> >> Subject: Re: Help file TOC Sentence VS Question
>> >>
>> >> I prefer to put the relevant verb first:
>> >>
>> >> Time Cards
>> >>   Understanding Time Cards
>> >>   Create a Time Card
>> >>   View a Time Card
>> >>   Find a Time Card
>> >>
>> >> On Tue, Oct 27, 2009 at 12:02 PM, Robert Courtney <bobsc1 -at- earthlink -dot- net> wrote:
>> >> > I have usually used questions in my help files on how to do things. I
>> >> > use sentence headings for some things such as objects that I need to
>> >> > discuss. Such as:
>> >> >
>> >> > Time Cards
>> >> >    What is a Time Card?
>> >> >    How do I Create Time Card?
>> >> >    How do I View A Time Card?
>> >> >    How do I Search a Time Card?
>> >> >
>> >> > VS
>> >> >
>> >> > Time Cards
>> >> >    What is a Time Card?
>> >> >    Creating a Time Card
>> >> >    Viewing a Time Card
>> >> >    Searching a Time Card
>> >> >
>> >> > Is there really a preference to using a sentence TOC and headings vs
>> >> > questions to accomplish tasks?
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