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Subject:RE: IS or ARE From:Joyce -dot- Fetterman -at- L-3com -dot- com To:"Lauren" <lauren -at- writeco -dot- net>, <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com> Date:Wed, 25 Jul 2012 10:27:29 -0400
Lauren wrote:
"I would change to "A current customer receives two months of free
service." That rewrite is better for grammar and for marketing because
it puts the customer first rather than placing the provider of service
first."
"A current customer"? Which one? How will a current customer be chosen
from among all of the current customers?
<ducking>
Joyce
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