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Then it wouldn't be clear what is based on clusters- numbers or events.
Regards,
Reshma
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On 19-Jul-2013, at 10:32 PM, John G <john -at- garisons -dot- com> wrote:
> IMHO, ditch the comma.
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> On Fri, Jul 19, 2013 at 12:28 PM, Karen Felker <akaren -at- earthlink -dot- net> wrote:
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>> A reviewer is disputing my use of a comma in this sentence that describes
>> a clustering algorithm: "Assigns numbers to actors and events, based on
>> natural groups called clusters."
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>> I want to defend this comma, but I'm not sure how to do that. Does "based"
>> introduce an adverbial phrase, because it describes the assigning process?
>> I find it confusing to change the sentence to say "Assigns numbers, based
>> on natural groups called clusters, to actors and events."
>> Same with this rewrite: "Assigns numbers to actors and events. The numbers
>> are based on natural groups called clusters."
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>> Karen Felker
>> akaren -at- earthlink -dot- net
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