Sue Gallagher's Question

Subject: Sue Gallagher's Question
From: George Hayhoe <george -dot- hayhoe -at- SRS -dot- GOV>
Date: Tue, 4 Apr 1995 09:26:00 -0400

Instead of "Select the vault in which the file for which you want to
change the number of versions resides," how 'bout "Select the vault in
which the desired file resides"? The introduction to the procedure
steps should provide sufficient context for the user to know what he
or she wants to do with the file and why.

--George Hayhoe (george -dot- hayhoe -at- srs -dot- gov)
Assistant to the President for Recognition Programs, STC

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