Help my sentence... please

Subject: Help my sentence... please
From: "Kahn, Stacey" <skahn -at- WB -dot- COM>
Date: Thu, 3 Aug 1995 15:46:26 U

The user manual I'm editing has this sentence:


In addition, the framis requires a thingy to have been developed, using the
whatsis tool, that contains whoosies to be used in the whizbang.

(It's the framis that contains the whoosies, and the whoosies that are being
used in the whizbang.)

Help!

TIA
Stacey Kahn
SKahn -at- wb -dot- com


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