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Subject:Re: Help my sentence... please From:Dan Martillotti <danm -at- DEV -dot- TIVOLI -dot- COM> Date:Fri, 4 Aug 1995 15:14:27 CDT
> > In addition, the framis requires a thingy to have been developed,
> > using the whatsis tool, that contains whoosies to be used in the
> > whizbang.
> >
> > (It's the framis that contains the whoosies, and the whoosies
> > that are being used in the whizbang.)
How about
In addition, the framis requires you to develop a thingy using the whatsis tool.
The whizbang then uses the whoosies contained in the framis.
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