FW: wording help

Subject: FW: wording help
From: Bill Fetzner <BFetzner -at- ETCCONNECT -dot- COM>
Date: Tue, 27 Jul 1999 11:03:25 -0500

Sara Wigsr writes:

> I don't like the following phrase: ...problems or issues are followed up
> on
> and documented. Any ideas for the followed up on wording?
>
How about ... problems or issues are resolved and documented.

Bill Fetzner, Tech. Writer
bfetzner -at- etcconnect -dot- com
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