"Next" or "the following" -- What is your preference?
Cardimon,Craig
ccardimon at M-S-G.com
Mon Dec 11 09:08:59 MST 2006
I like it. It's clear and direct. Too much in life isn't.
-----Original Message-----
From: Gene Kim-Eng [mailto:techwr at genek.com]
Sent: Monday, December 11, 2006 11:05 AM
To: Pro TechWriter; Claire Conant
Cc: TECHWR-L
Subject: Re: "Next" or "the following" -- What is your preference?
Assuming that the directive in question is coming on the heels
of a description of the form and its purpose, my choice would
be simply to say:
To complete the form:
1. First step
2. Second step
3. Third step
etc.
Gene Kim-Eng
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Cc: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l at lists.techwr-l.com>
Sent: Monday, December 11, 2006 7:51 AM
Subject: Re: "Next" or "the following" -- What is your preference?
> It's more like:
>
> "Choose one from the list, next:"
>
> or
>
> "Use the steps, next, to complete the form:"
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