Table punctuation

Nancy Allison maker at verizon.net
Thu Apr 12 13:24:24 MDT 2007


Hi, everyone. I have a punctuation question for tables. (I'm typing this in a monospace font; if you use a proportional font, it may be hard to read.)

The table has two columns, labeled:

This field . . .    Allows you to . . . .

with entries like

Shoe size           Select the clodhopper that's right for YOU!

In these tables, usually there's one cell that contains a complete sentence, so I end up putting a period at the end of every cell in that column.

Unfortunately, the real technical content is incredibly dense and full of financial jargon.

One of the rows is like this:

Clown name          - Enter a name for your personal clown, or
                    - Leave blank for us to choose one for you.

Only after pain and struggle did I unpick the original run-on sentence into two clearly stated alternatives. I'm proud of my clearly stated definition of the Clown name field! But . . . its formatting is a tad tricky.

All other rows in the second column have a terminal period, so this is the solution I've chosen. I don't think that moving the "or" to a separate line would change anything, do you? I suppose I could put it as:

- Enter a name for your personal clown. 
  Or
- Leave blank for us to choose one for you.

That definitely does not look better to me. 

Proving that I can obssess with the best of you -- and looking for help . . . 

--Nancy


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