Is this hackneyed or cliche?

[Dori Green]

Jim Jones wrote:

save the valuable insight, humor, and good attitude for in-person
interviews

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Sorry, I guess I was not clear enough that the cover letter and regular
resume go to the HR or agency chaff-sifters; the cover letter would include
a "hook" of mentioning that the resume-as-ISO-docs is included in the
portfolio -- which is presented most often in a binder at the interview and
sometimes online in an invitation-only Yahoo group.

Dori Green