How would you revise?

[Ben]

Without any further context, how would you revise the following?

 

When a loop is running, once the first loop is completed, the lines in the
loop are not editable anymore." My revision: "When a loop is running, you
cannot edit the lines in the loop after the first loop is completed." 

 

Or revise this sentence: "For submitted sequences, all lines are editable."
My revision: "You can edit all lines for submitted sequences."

 

Your thoughts?