"Appears" vs. "will appear"?
Geoff Hart
ghart at videotron.ca
Thu May 3 11:38:16 MDT 2007
Keith Hansen wondered: <<I want to canvass your opinions here. Which
do you prefer: No. 1: "Click the ABC button. The XYZ dialog box
appears." No. 2: "Click the ABC button. The XYZ dialog box will
appear.">>
I'll take door number 3, Monty: "Click ABC to display the XYZ dialog
box." In some contexts, "1. Click ABC. 2. In the XYZ dialog box [do
something]." Shorter, focuses on the task, and doesn't make any
predictions about the future.
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