Bullfighter diagnosis on post (was Re: Writing Corrective Actionsfor customers?)

Michael West WestM at conwag.com
Wed Apr 23 17:19:00 MDT 2008


"Leonard C. Porrello" <Leonard.Porrello at SoleraTec.com> wrote on 24/04/2008 
02:45:54 AM:

> Really, Mike, you don't like, "Where one gets off dumping on people..."?
> I think it has a perfectly clear objective-correlative. 

I didn't say I don't like it. I said I don't understand what it refers to. 
To what does it refer, specifically, in the context of the subject thread? 
What specific statement or expression in this discussion, in your opinion, 
constitutes "dumping on people"? 

> I think you forget that conversational email (which, by the way, is what
> Techwr-l is) is informal even if its matter is professional

No, I don't forget. I know conversational email when I see it, and 
Techwr-l certainly is it. But conversational needn't mean 
"incomprehensible."

> Perhaps "pissing-contest", as a metaphor, has a clearer
> objective-correlative for you?

Sorry, you've exceeded your hyphen allowance for this post.

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Mike West
Melbourne, Australia


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