Beginning topic titles with "How to..."?

Geoff Hart ghart at videotron.ca
Tue Feb 19 07:38:46 MST 2008


Deborah Slutzky wondered: <<... how folks feel about beginning topic  
titles with "How to..." I'm used to beginning them with a gerund...>>

Although the phrasing isn't wrong, there are two strikes against "how  
to": First, it's two words longer than necessary. It's not the length  
that's an issue, since deleting "how to" and adding "ing" to the verb  
only saves you 3 to 4 characters. Instead, it's the need to mentally  
prune out the two words. Again, not a huge concern, but why bother?

The large issue is that if you standardize on "how to X", all topics  
begin with "how to", not with the verb. That looks really bad in a  
table of contents because the repetition creates rivers of white  
space and draws attention towards the repeating pattern and away from  
the actual verb.

Gerunds have become the standard because they're simple,  
straightforward, and effective. Why mess with success?


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