active vs. passive voice, or epithet?
Ned Bedinger
doc at edwordsmith.com
Sun Mar 30 23:24:30 MDT 2008
Yves--
Epithet is a new condition for me, thanks for drawing the distinction. I
hope I understand it, but my literary legs are a bit wobbly.
The example you gave would have a different result if you'd made five
identically-constructed sentences, each with one modifier of window.
Thanks,
--Ned
> Just take care of confusing passive voice and epithet.
> "The window is big, blue, shiny, displayed and functional."
> No passive form there.
>
> Regards,
>
> YJ
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