active vs. passive voice, or epithet?

Ned Bedinger doc at edwordsmith.com
Sun Mar 30 23:24:30 MDT 2008


Yves--

Epithet is a new condition for me, thanks for drawing the distinction. I 
hope I understand it, but my literary legs are a bit wobbly.

The example you gave would have a different result if you'd made five 
identically-constructed sentences, each with one modifier of window.

Thanks,

--Ned

>   Just take care of confusing passive voice and epithet.
>   "The window is big, blue, shiny, displayed and functional."
>   No passive form there.
>    
>   Regards,
>    
>   YJ



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