Putting tips/notes within a numbered list?

Subject: Putting tips/notes within a numbered list?
From: "Hart, Geoff" <Geoff-H -at- MTL -dot- FERIC -dot- CA>
To: "TECHWR-L" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- raycomm -dot- com>
Date: Wed, 3 Apr 2002 09:19:50 -0500


Nuzhath Shereen reports: <<Iam new to this mailing list. I'm not sure if
this list has discussions on basic concepts.>>

Just about any topic is fair game, provided it relates to technical
communication. That's particularly true if you've looked through the
archives (http://www.raycomm.com/techwhirl/archives/archives.html) and
haven't found an answer to your question.

<<I would like to know if we can put a tip or a note between 2 sentences of
a numbered list? For example:...
2. do this
tip: .....
3. do that
Is the above format okay? or should we put the tip at the end of the list.
But the tip here is relevant only to item 2?>>

Your format is fine, provided that readers do not require the tip before
they can successfully do step 2. Such tips, including warnings, should
always come _before_ the step they describe so readers have a chance to
understand the potential problems before they try to perform the step. If
the tip describes the best way to do step 2, it should come before step 2;
if it only explains something the reader should consider _after_ they've
done step 2, then it's current position is fine. (A good example might be:
2. Save the file. Tip: make a backup copy now in case your computer
crashes.)

--Geoff Hart, geoff-h -at- mtl -dot- feric -dot- ca
Forest Engineering Research Institute of Canada
580 boul. St-Jean
Pointe-Claire, Que., H9R 3J9 Canada

"Writing, in a way, is listening to the others' language and reading with
the others' eyes."--Trinh T. Minh-Ha, "Woman native other"


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