Re: Department of redundancy department
From: John Posada <jposada01 -at- yahoo -dot- com>
Subject: Re: Department of redundancy department
Not redundant..I see a meaning. It's just poorly written
First, I'd change "populated" with the word "configured".
Next, I'd rewrite it as:
"Each switch is configured with assorted modules. In some instances,
the functionality of the modules overlaps and in other instances, the
functionality of each module is unique."
John Posada
Senior Technical Writer
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