RE: levels of detail -- are we beyond this?

[Doug Grossman <Doug -dot- Grossman -at- sas -dot- com>]

The shampoo instructions also need to say when you can stop. If you always follow Instruction #5, you'd be shampooing until it was all gone and then have to run out to the store to get another bottle so that you could continue. You'd have very clean hair, but not much of a life otherwise.

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From: techwr-l-bounces+doug -dot- grossman=sas -dot- com -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com [mailto:techwr-l-bounces+doug -dot- grossman=sas -dot- com -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com] On Behalf Of Butler, Darren J CTR USAF AFMC 584 CBSS/GBHAC
Sent: Friday, August 15, 2008 4:21 PM
To: Tom Johnson; TECHWR-L'
Subject: RE: levels of detail -- are we beyond this?

Instructions:

1.  Wet hair thoroughly with warm water

2.  Apply a generous amount of Mr. Andre's SuperModel-Strength, Anti-Sludge Shampoo (with kumquat & alfalfa extracts)

3.  Gently Wash hair

4.  Rinse

5.  Repeat

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