RE: Need a term

Subject: RE: Need a term
From: "Butler, Darren J CTR USAF AFMC 584 CBSS/GBHDB" <Darren -dot- Butler -dot- ctr -at- Robins -dot- af -dot- mil>
To: "Lauren" <lauren -at- writeco -dot- net>, <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Fri, 18 Jun 2010 12:00:17 -0400

"Proposed Improvements" ?

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Subject: Re: Need a term

That's so simple; it's not fancy at all. I was hoping for a term with a

little more chiffon.

My slightly more professional-ish (than my chiffon comment) opinion is
that "updates" conveys changes to current features rather than changes
to *and* additions of new features. I tend to seek terms that provide a

little internal marketing to maintain and build user interest in the
product. A term in this case, I think, should imply a sense of product
evolution, rather than simply maintenance.

Lauren



On 6/18/2010 8:41 AM, Butler, Darren J CTR USAF AFMC 584 CBSS/GBHDB
wrote:
> Thanks to all for your suggestion. They helped jump-start the '75 Ford
> Pinto that resides where my brain should be.
>
> I think I'm going with "Proposed Updates".
> To me, it sounds like somebody "official" (i.e. somebody who doesn't
> actually use or maintain the application) wants these items included
in
> version next.
>
>
> Wha-da-ya-think?
>


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References:
Re: Need a term: From: foremangraphics
RE: Need a term: From: Butler, Darren J CTR USAF AFMC 584 CBSS/GBHDB
RE: Need a term: From: Butler, Darren J CTR USAF AFMC 584 CBSS/GBHDB
Re: Need a term: From: Lauren

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