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Subject:RE: Taking active vs. passive voice too far From:Erika Yanovich <ERIKA_y -at- rad -dot- com> To:"M -dot- Vina-Baltsas -at- mindray -dot- com" <M -dot- Vina-Baltsas -at- mindray -dot- com>, "techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com" <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com> Date:Wed, 10 Jul 2013 05:41:41 +0000
In addition to the great advice you got, here is a bit of extra.
I'd replace "to access" with the action you need to perform with the List Trends, your main goal for going there. Users access places in the GUI to perform tasks.
HTH,
Erika
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I'd use:
List Trends
To access List Trends, click the History button in the Main Screen.
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