Re: Comma question

Subject: Re: Comma question
From: Gene Kim-Eng <techwr -at- genek -dot- com>
To: Karen Felker <akaren -at- earthlink -dot- net>
Date: Fri, 19 Jul 2013 10:14:43 -0700

I vote for the two-sentence approach. "The" in the second sentence is optional, but whether it's there or not should depend on the style of writing in the rest of the document. You could also make it a single sentence using a semicolon.

Gene Kim-Eng

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