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The original's not bad and to me was not obviously written by a
non-native speaker.
The suggested edit for #3 radically changes the meaning. Is it correct?
The suggested edits for #1 and #2 don't seem to improve things enough
that I'm sure it's worth the time and money.
On Thu, Aug 28, 2014 at 6:10 AM, <M -dot- Vina-Baltsas -at- mindray -dot- com> wrote:
> 3) Make sure that the temperature measurement site is correct.
> His suggestion: "Ensure that the probe chosen is appropriate for the
> measurement site"
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