The word 'THAT'

Subject: The word 'THAT'
From: "William B. MacLeod" <WBMACLE -at- TEL1 -dot- ACCUSORT -dot- COM>
Date: Fri, 15 Sep 1995 13:45:25 EST

In Technical Writing, which of the following is better or correct:

The system must be shut down properly so data is not lost
-OR-
The system must be shut down properly so THAT data is not lost

and why?

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