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Subject:Re: Some Help With Re-phrasing From:Martha J Davidson <editrix -at- SLIP -dot- NET> Date:Thu, 22 Oct 1998 09:12:25 -0700
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>While the Summary window is displayed, you can double-click
>any entry shown in the Summary window. This action causes
>the system to display a new Job View window for this job.
How about:
In the Summary window, when you double-click any entry, the system displays
a new Job View window.
martha
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Martha Jane {Kolman | Davidson} mailto:editrix -at- slip -dot- net
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