RE: George Hayhoe, a rant, and a resignation

Subject: RE: George Hayhoe, a rant, and a resignation
From: "Boudreaux, Madelyn (GE Healthcare, consultant)" <MadelynBoudreaux -at- ge -dot- com>
To: <techwr-l -at- lists -dot- techwr-l -dot- com>
Date: Thu, 26 Mar 2009 12:30:41 -0400

Isn't "consider your audience" the first thing they teach in Tech
Writing?

At any rate, here we have a prime and lovely example of "the flounce,"
captured in the wild. I'm more used to the American Extended Adolescent
Flounce, which involves fewer words, more of them made of 4 letters, and
rarely involves headings and sub-points. However, this American Academic
Flounce, while wordier, resembles its cousin in many ways: appeal to
authority, wounded expression of not being appreciated, and reference to
another, similarly underappreciated former group member who, although
he/she left quietly (without flounce), reportedly holds the same views
as the flouncer.

Sincerely,
Madelyn Boudreaux
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Follow-Ups:

References:
Re: Wrong? Poor style? OK?: From: Michael West
RE: Grammar: From: David Hailey
RE: Grammar: From: Pinkham, Jim
RE: George Hayhoe, a rant, and a resignation: From: David Hailey
Re: George Hayhoe, a rant, and a resignation: From: John Posada
Re: George Hayhoe, a rant, and a resignation: From: David Dorbin
Re: George Hayhoe, a rant, and a resignation: From: Guy K. Haas
Re: George Hayhoe, a rant, and a resignation: From: Milan Davidovic

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