Need Help with Wording!

Subject: Need Help with Wording!
From: "Susan W. Gallagher" <sgallagher -at- STARBASECORP -dot- COM>
Date: Mon, 3 Apr 1995 14:05:53 -0700

Hey gang...

I've got a problem with an instruction! The construction
works well for other areas of the program (restore a file, etc.)
but for *this* particular area (changing the number of versions
to keep) it's really a mouthfull. See what'cha think...

1. At the Boris main window, select Vault>Change Number
of Versions to Keep... from the menu.

2. If you have more than one file vault defined, the menu
cascades to display the file vault names. Select the
vault in which the file for which you want to change
the number of versions resides.

I can't see how to change the sentence to make it a bit less
intimidating without making it either grammatically less
correct, more vague, or wordier (or -- heaven forbid -- all three!).

Gotta put this book to bed by the end of the week, so lemmeNo!!!

Sue Gallagher
StarBase Corp, Irvine CA
sgallagher -at- starbasecorp -dot- com

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